Doonesbury



So Status Quo has been accused of always playing the same three chords for long enough that they themselves can take the mickey out of it.Meanwhile, over in comics land, Tim O’Neil thought his dismissal of Doonesbury would not be controversial, because really, who still follows Doonesbury:

The best that can be said about Trudeau is that for a brief period of time he was an important cartoonist, and the worst that can be said is that he contributed materially to the development of his generation’s completely unironic self-fixation. Alex Doonesbury alludes to this fact in the 07/30 strip when she refers to the “aging hippie vibe” that permeates the proceedings. It should go without saying that the hippies are no longer “aging,” the hippies are officially “aged,” and the very idea that they get to officially “pass the torch” to succeeding generations is laughable. I would say that Doonesbury exists to cater to the self-regard of its audience, but I don’t really feel comfortable making any kind of pronouncements about the kind of people who follow the strip, if such people actually exist. The only people who pay attention to Doonesbury with any consistency are the newspaper editors who have to read it in order to make sure that this week’s sequence doesn’t offend the 70-year old Tea Partiers who comprise the main audience for all printed media these days.

Quite a lot of people, it turns out. (frex.) Now we could make this all about the difference between the critic and the audience and, depending on writer and their agenda, either scold the latter for their low taste or the former for their elitism and ivory tower eggheadism. But that would be dull. Let’s just take as our assumption that what a critic will look for, needs to look for in any work of art, will always be different from what the general audience will look for.

Certainly Tim wasn’t wrong about the deficiencies of Doonesbury as a comic. The art has never been anything but servicable and over the decades has had any trace of individuality leeched out of it. Storywise there hasn’t been much originality either, with plotting remaining the same mixture of (gentle) satire, soap opera and political commentary that Trudeau had down pat in the early seventies.

And yet…

Doonesbury‘s real qualities never lay with its art and in fact an argument could be made that better art, more personal art, would distract from those qualities. For Trudeau to get his messages through, the art must not be distracting, must be smooth and easily digestible. The same goes, to a lesser extent, for the storytelling.

Because what Doonesbury has done well over the decades is to stay relevant. Far from the baby boomer hippiefest Tim paints it as . it has constantly stayed angry. Only recently there was the abortion storyline, with several newspapers dropping these strips, while in the past decade he has of course spent a lot of time on Iraq, Afghanistan and the treatment of veterans of these wars.

These are not really comix virtues, so if you judge Doonesbury just on its comix merits, especially its art, you’ll miss why it is still such an important strip and why so many people, not just aging boomers are attached to it.

Deitch v Ramsey

Tom spurgeon grouses about Wikipedia:

* from the department of largely unfair comparisons one: word count of wikipedia entry for minor X-Men character Doug Ramsey = 4063; word count of wikipedia entry for surpassing underground and alt-comics talent Kim Deitch = 1082.

It’s unfair because it falls into the lipstick fallacy: if only we spent as much on space as we did on lipstick, we’d be on Mars right now — not just our robots.

But it’s also unfair because it doesn’t take into account how Wikipedia works and why it’s easier to write about Doug Ramsey than it is to write about Kim Deitch. First, with a fictional character you don’t have the handicap of having to write under Wikipedia’s stringent rules about biographies of living persons where you have to double and triple check your sources and quotes before it can be included. Wikipedia has burned its fingers a couple of times with having dumb or malicious edits getting media coverage. In comics for example, there was the whole John Byrne kerfluffle. Second, it’s often much easier to source facts for fictional characters too: just summarise the comics themselves or fanpages about them.

Writing a good article about an important, but slightly obscure figure like Deitch is much more difficult. Less sources online, fewer facts you can just regurgitate, more room to fall foul to Wikipedia’s ever increasing body of rules. I’ve started a fair few comics subjects myself when I was still active there, but it can be very hard to do more than a skeleton outline, where you list the biographical basics, the various publications and such. Anything else –art style, critical impact and so on — is difficult to do on Wikipedia and not get challenged on it. There comes a point where it’s just easier to work on it for your own site or publication elsewhere than Wikipedia.

(Course, it doesn’t help that the sort of geeks who read X-Men are much more present on Wikipedia than the sort of geeks who are into underground comix)

Food diary (I)

Seymour the fat slob from Watchmen

Is there a more pathetic figure in popular culture than the fat, nerdy slob? The balding comic book guy with his cheetos and toddler dress sense reading Aquaman, the fortysomething D&D player still living in his mother’s basement, that neckbearded guy in stretchy, clingy, clingy latex at the con who has never heard of deodorant. In every intranerd fight these images are lobbied around like grenades on a battlefield; We don’t need bullies to harass us, we can do it ourselves. You can’t really insult somebody’s race, sex, gender or religion without looking like a dickhead, but you can always call somebody a fat nerd, a loser.

And if you’re a fat, sloppy eater in any piece of fiction, you’re best bet is to be the comic relief, because otherwise you’re the disgusting, revolting villain nobody respects and somebody will kill you in a particularly pathetic way at the end of the story. Especially in comics, where the occasional Kingpin is the exception amongst the larger villains, more likely to resemble the Slug.

Nevertheless, it wasn’t comics that made me fat, though they didn’t help; it was puberty. I was a svelte young god until I was about twelve; now if I still resemble a Greek god, it’s Bacchus and not this one. Over the years, slowly, I’ve grown bigger: eighty kilos, ninety, hundred, hundred and ten, hundred and twenty…

Three years ago I had to change, had to lose weight to get slim enough so that we could do that kidney transplant operation for Sandra. So I started dieting and exercising and I managed to lose ten, fifteen kilos. All it took was three-four evenings in the week going to the gym and not eating anything between meals. Oh, and of course, having the threat of Sandra dying of kidney failure hanging over me if I didn’t get slim fast enough.

No wonder perhaps that in the two years since the operation, I’ve ballooned out again, especially the last year, with her gone. Comfort eating and there’s nothing as comforting as stuffing down a Burger King combo meal with added extra hamburger, is there, even if you feel physically ill and depressed afterwards.

But the good times can’t last forever. I was coming up to one hundred and thirty kilogrammes, which was a bit too much even for me. I’ve lost some weight since, but I need to have a new incentive to do so. Hence this post. I need to know how much I’m eating each day, knowing that I’m eating too much when I am, not being able to cheat and what better way than to do so in public?

Starting today therefore I’ll be posting a food diary each day, though they’ll be a lot shorter. I’ll weight myself each week and will keep an exercise diary as well. Hopefully this will help me keep momentum going and not let me backslide into bad habits. So, without further ado:

Weight this morning: 126.7 kilogrammes.

  • Drinks morning: 3 mugs (0.25 litres) of coffee with sugar, 0.5 litres water
  • Drinks afternoon: 1 mug of coffee, 2 cups (0.125 litres) of water
  • Drinks evening: one litre light orange soda.
  • Lunch: 4 slices brown bread, 1 slice of 48+ cheese (Old Amsterdam), 2 slices of Brugse beenham, Pear quark + muesli. One can of Coke Zero
  • Dinner: Stew of lean beef, beans, onion, leeks and mushrooms.
  • Snacks: four small snack sausages, fifty kcal each.

(Inspired by Tom Spurgeon as well as Hairy Bikers.)

EC Comics revisited

Alan David Doane responds to my dismissal of EC comics:

My thought is that yes, the writing in most of the EC horror and SF stories was rote hackwork, but Kurtzman’s Two-Fisted Tales and Frontline Combat, as well as Krigstein’s “Master Race” are without question among the best comics ever created, words and pictures both. Not only are they not, as Wisse asserts, examples of comics where “the story doesn’t matter,” but rather, they represent absolute perfection in their melding of image with text, something Kurtzman and Krigstein (geniuses both) were obsessed with. I don’t care if I never read a Jack Kamen cuckolded husband story again, but the thought of not being able to pull out Master Race or a Kurtzman war comic from time to time, to remind myself how good comics can be, fills me with despair. Krigstein and Kurtzman alone make EC a line worth the respect and awe it generates in informed comics readers.

The final page of Master Race

Obviously he’s right to question my blanket dismissal; there was good stuff being done by EC, comics that combined excellent art with good writing. Most of them were written by Kurtzman, who was indeed a genius and a cartoonist, not just a writer, which shows in every script he had his hand in. The same goes for Krigstein and “Master Race” is indeed a great short story.

Yet Master Race‘s genius lies in pictures, not the story itself. Without the artistic choices Krigstein made as a cartoonist, it would only be just another surprise twist ending story. A man goes to take the subway, sees a stranger he recognises from his days in a nazi death camp, he flashes back to his time there and at the end of it it’s revealed he was the camp commander, not a victim (du-duh-duuuh!) and he’s so agitated he flees away from his silent accuser, slips and falls down the platform in front of an oncoming train.

What gives that story its real punch is the art, Krigstein’s figures, his layout. Those narrowing panels at the top right, the cutting between the oncoming train coming closer and the protagonist slipping, the sheer visual overload of the metro moving past the platform contrasted with the static pose of the man in black, the way the man moves back from the light of the platform into the darkness, turning away from the scene, the way it all fits together on the page. It’s brilliantly done and it’s been rarely equalled.

That’s the genius of comics; this is more than a story being gussied up with pretty art, this is where a so-so story is transformed through the choices the cartoonist made to tell the story. Which is different from the vast majority of EC comics, even those drawn by people like Wally Wood or All Williamson or John Severin, where those sort of choices where not made.

I was a bit trollish in my earlier post (no, really? — Ed.) and I never meant all EC stories were bad, just that there is a case to be made that EC as a whole is overrated, partially because we’ve always been more focused on the visual than the textual as comics readers, partially because earlier generations of fans and comics historians have made so much of them, while we’ve missed the context in which they were published, all the other good comics that came out in the fifties from other publishers who didn’t have these sort of cheerleaders.

The dead hand of EC

Back in the mid-nineties, when Gemstone comics had the licence to reprint EC comics, they printed annuals of the various titles by bundling five-six issues together as a new collection. These must have been incredibly overprinted, as the local remaindered bookstore still have dozens and dozens of them for sale. I bought a couple of them on Saturday while waiting for my parents to finish clothes shopping and while reading them over the weekend, I realised something.

These comics are crap.

Not the art of course, which for the most part is of a very high standard indeed, but the stories. The best of them barely rise above tedious O. Henry stuff and it’s no wonder the ovrrated sentimentality of Ray Bradbury made such an impression when first adapted here, compared to what it appeared next to. It’s just not very good at all, certainly not that much better than what was being published at other companies, yet EC has become a symbol of the best of American comics, so why is that?

Well, comics fans have always been more interested in art than story and good art will always win out over bad storytelling, but not the other way around, and it has been fans who’ve been writing the history books until recently. Through uncritical repetition EC’s reputation has become reified fact. This is helped by the simple fact that for decades EC comics were almost the only comics from that era that were in print. Worse, when the first fan histories were written, even they were out of print and hard to get if hadn’t bought them from the newsstands when new. Which means both that newer generations of EC readers (like me) miss the context in which they were published, it also meant that quite often we’d come to them through the fan histories and slick artbooks which of course told us how great these comics were before we had a chance to judge them for ourselves.

All of which wouldn’t be that bad, if not for the bad example EC has set for the American comic field. If those are the best comics the US comics industry has produced, with excellent art but mediocre stories, is it any wonder that so many later comics projects have followed the same route, with glitzy arts but no content, that so many underground and “alternative” comics ultimately dissappoint once you get past the visuals?

Or would that have been the case without EC too?

(Post inspired by this: “Sure, EC was important to 1960s-70s underground comics as a liberating influence, but was equally a weight to get out from under”. I think we’re still struggling to get out from under the EC comics legacy, from the idea that comics are good enough if the visuals are great and story doesn’t matter.)