Short SF marathon Day 3&4: Bell, Black, de Bodard, Butner, Bowes, Brenchley

Helena Bell, “Lovecraft.” Clarkesworld, October 2014.

My mother visited yesterday, so I had no time to post then. Hence six stories today, the first of which is a domestic horror drama, about a middle aged woman who carries a mouth on her collar bone, through which she spews cthulhu and the young woman who starts to care for her and one special cthulhu. A deftly done kitchen sink drama, so to speak, but I’m not quite sure which period it’s supposed to be set in and if the “Howard” in the story is meant to be the Lovecraft of the title. It left me slightly dissatisfied.

Holly Black, “Ten Rules for Being an Intergalactic Smuggler (the Successful Kind).” Lightspeed, September 2014.

This was a, fun, old fashioned adventure science fiction story, of a young woman who stows away on her uncle ship and learns the hard way how to become a successfull smuggler. There’s nothing really surprising or new about the story, but the way Black tells it makes all the difference. I’d like her to write more about Tera Lloyd and her new, alien partner, as this pretty much feels like an origin story.

Aliette de Bodard, “The Days of the War, as Red as Blood, as Dark as Bile.” Subterranean, Spring 2014.

This is another short story set in the same universe as On a Red Station, Drifting, set in the same slow burning civil war featured in that as well. If you like this setting, you’ll this, but it is a bit of a story fragment rather than a complete story, a feeling I have with more of her short work.

It is in fact something I’ve noticed with quite of the short stories I’ve read so far, that they set up and briefly explore a situation, before ending. Few of the stories seem to tell a fully rounded story; sometimes this looks like a deliberate choice, as with “Lovecraft”, just a slice out of somebody’s life intersected with the strange, sometimes it seems as if the writer’s running out of steam. Is this an internet thing?

Richard Butner, “Circa.” Interfictions Online #3, May 2014.

I read this two hours ago and already need to dip back into the story to see what it was about. Not a good sign, but this is a ghost story in which two eighteen year old friends go for a sleep over in an old house in 1984, he makes at her, she rejects them, then he sees her future self when she’s on the toilet. They meet up again in 2014 the night before the house will be demolished, talk about their separate lives since then and then he sees the ghost of her past self.

Trite is the word for it. Midlife crisises are not made more interesting with a mild application of the supernatural.

Richard Bowes, “Sleep Walking Now and Then.” Tor.com, July 9, 2014.

I’ve read stories like this before, in uninspiring volumes of Gardner Dozois’ Year’s Best, a slightly meandering, overlong story of future decadence, clumsily written, where the writer feels the need to mention that New York is now the Big Arena three or four times in the course of the story. Anyway, a future theatre production is set in an old hotel, showcasing several acts of violence that happened in its turbulent past, through which the audience can walk and look on to. All it’s missing is a third act…

There’s the hint of a decent story here, but the writing needs to be tightened a lot.

Chaz Brenchley, “The Burial of Sir John Mawe at Cassini.” Subterranean, Spring 2014.

I’m a bit wary of Space:1899 style retrofuture steampunk stories, but if you like that sort of thing, this is a good example of how to do it properly. On a Mars where the British presence is barely tolerated by the natives, who, in a neat twist, aren’t so much the people who dug the canals but the people who live in the canals and the crater lakes, a man hanged for violating the Charter is being buried with all the pomp and circumstance the city of Cassini can give him. As Old Cobb, the gravedigger finds out, something else is going on though.

What made this story for me was that Brenchley is fully aware of the nastiness of the British Empire he depicts, even though this isn’t noticable on the surface of it. It makes me curious to see if this was a oneshot or if he has written more in this universe.

Short SF marathon Day 2: Barber and Bear, oh my

Jessica Barber, “Coma Kings.” Lightspeed, February 2014.

This is the first thing I’ve read of Jessica Barber, a decent story that doesn’t quite come together. I think this is one of the sort of stories Jonathan McCalmont was talking about, in that the sfnal element is only there to facilitate what could just as well be a mainstream story, isn’t examined beyond this. Coma is a new virtual reality game that, well, locks you in your own brain while playing. Jenny is the secondbest player in the sate, save only her sister Annie, but Annie doesn’t play with her anymore. The reasons for why Jenny is desperate for her sister to play and the refusal of Annie to do so might be obvious considering the title, but Barber allows her story to reach that revelation naturally.

It’s just that the story doesn’t really progress after that, not so much ends but stops. Perhaps that was the only way that it could end, without resolution or change but it’s still slightly unsatisfying, even if it hits its emotional high. The game itself doesn’t convince, anything that you need complete concentration for to this extreme seems unlikely to take off in the way it apparantly has done here. Yes, there’s the Oculus Rift, but that doesn’t put you in a, well, coma.

But than the technology isn’t the point here, is it. It’s the emotional situation it makes possible, which could’ve been written in a more mundane way, with a sister in a real coma, but there that hope of her waking up and coming back to the world of her own accord would be far less, there wouldn’t be the possibility of contact, that why Barber needs the game there. Maybe she could’ve done more with it, had she had more space to do so.

Elizabeth Bear, “Covenant.” Slate, September 11, 2014.
Elizabeth Bear, “This Chance Planet.” Tor.com, October 22, 2014.

I first read one of Elizabeth Bear’s novels in 2013 and since then she’s become one of my favourite novelist, not having read any of her shorter work so far though. These two stories seem to be set in roughly the same future, sometime in the middle or late 21st centyury, after Peak Oil has finally forced the abandonment of private cars and everything that entails. It’s a slightly dated future, what with shale oil making it possible to burn up the planet long before we run out of gas…

“Covenant” is about a serial killer who’s undergone a rightminding and a gender change as part of their rehabilitation process, becoming the victim of another serial killer. It’s a decent story, with lots of internal monologuing explaining the rightminding process and all, so far the most old fashioned science fiction story I’ve read. I can’t stand serial killer stories normally, but Bear won me over with the rightminding, again the strongest actual sfnal element I’ve seen so far. The ramifications of such a technique, the impact on one individual are explored in a way that Barber doesn’t do in her story with the Coma game.

“This Chance Planet”, after a Maurice Maeterlinck quote, doesn’t really have a reason to be set in the future. It could just as well been written as an contemporary fairy story, about a stray dog in the Moscow metro forcing a woman to realise what a deadbeat her boyfriend is. One of those stories where you can’t quite believe the relationship, the protagonist being that blind to her boyfriend’s faults.

Short SF marathon Day 1: Anders, Arnason, Bailey

One of the impetuses behind this little project was reading Jonathan McCalmont’s series of posts about the state of short story SFF, especially his theory that it has shifted from being idea driven to emotionally driven:

In each of these stories, the genre elements sit somewhere between the metaphorical and the literal; aspects of a fictional world that seem to mirror the contours of real emotional lives whilst leaving the world unchanged and the metaphor unresolved and shrouded with the kind of ambiguity that renders precision anathema[…]

Gradually, and with almost no discussion, the aesthetics of genre short fiction appear to be shifting away from stories that explore ideas and towards stories that seek to use genre elements as a way of encouraging readers to feel a particular way. In this bold new world, genre elements are easily excised or subsumed because the emphasis is always upon the characters’ emotional lives.

From my limited foray in reading the Hugo nominees last year, I can’t deny that he has a bit of a point here — a story like Wakulla Springs has no real genre elements but does evoke the right sort of emotion, was written by the right sort of people to be taken into science fiction. But what I wonder is a) how pervasive this really is and b) if this is anything new. In some ways it’s understandable if science fiction and fantasy writers feel comfortable with writing stories in which the fantastic elements are no longer the point, twohundred years after Shelley and ninety after Gernsback. There isn’t much that you can do with pure idea driven stories in SFF that hasn’t been done before, but there’s plenty of emotional terrain still largely unexplored.

And if science fiction is about metaphors made concrete, something like The Water that Falls on You from Nowhere, which could have easily been written as a memetic, coming out story is still made different by its fantastic elements, even if its consequences aren’t explored much beyond what John Chu needed to tell the story. That’s not particularly new in science fiction after all; take “The Cold Equations” frex, which also built its world up around the morality it attempted to sell rather than really explore the ramifications of its setting.

Charlie Jane Anders, “The Unfathomable Sisterhood of Ick.” Lightspeed, June 2014 (“Women Destroy Science Fiction!” special issue); reprinted at Tor.com.

Roger, Mary’s boyfriend has broken up with her, her best friend Stacia suggests she should ask for his memories of their love together, from before it turned sour, then steals them and uses them on herself out of jealousy or a misguided attempt to understand their love. Mary cuts off contact with Stacia, finds a new potential boyfriend, then Stacia starts stalking them…

Now here you do have a story that does depend on a sfnal gimmick, the ability to copy and absorb other people’s memories, to drive what’s essentially a memetic plot revolving around relationship issues that could’ve been set at any time since the fifties. This is a smart drug, bio-engineering future but with what look a bit too much like mid-20th century gender relations and dating rituals, but it is undeniably science fiction. I liked it, perhaps because of its mundanity, but also for its humanist core: these are actually nice people.

Eleanor Arnason, “The Scrivener.” Subterranean, Winter 2014.

I never parables or allegories and this story has a bit of that here, inspired by a discussion whether a plot and such is really necessary for a story. So here we have a Scrivener who names his three daughters Imagination, Ornamentation and Plot, which, ugh, is a bit too much on the nose. It also started off arch and with that sense of knowning that it is telling a story which has to do a lot to win me over. In the end however Arnason does do something mildly interesting with this, but it’s a slight story nonetheless.

Dale Bailey, “The End of the End of Everything.” Tor.com, April 23, 2014.

Now if we do want to talk about science fiction aping memetic, mainstream fiction, the worst it could do is to ape that cliched standby of fanboy sneers, the English professor with a midlife crisis contemplating infidelity. It’s the end of the world, the Ruin is creeping up on the artist colony Ben and his wife Lois have been invited to, but he can’t help thinking of his friend’s gorgous new wife or the mutilation artist living a couple of houses over. Bailey does have a way with a turn of phrase, but the dillemma at the heart of the story didn’t convince me, the allure of torture, death and mutilation was too bland, too safe when it doesn’t matter anymore because the world is ending anyway.

A short story a day keeps the critic at bay

I want to read more short science fiction and fantasy, even have subscribed to Clarkesworld and Apex Magazine but the digital issues keep piling up on my virtual coffee table. I need to set myself a challenge, to actually start reading short fiction again.

Enter Monsieur Caution’s nicely curated list of noticable fantasy, horror and science fiction short stories published in 2014. That seems like a nice challenge to plough through. Read one or two a day, jot down some notes about them here, see if I can get through it before the Hugo nominations close.

The list:

  1. Charlie Jane Anders, “The Unfathomable Sisterhood of Ick.” Lightspeed, June 2014 (“Women Destroy Science Fiction!” special issue); reprinted at Tor.com. [LM]
  2. Eleanor Arnason, “The Scrivener.” Subterranean, Winter 2014. [JS; LM]
  3. Dale Bailey, “The End of the End of Everything.” Tor.com, April 23, 2014. [LM; UM]
  4. Jessica Barber, “Coma Kings.” Lightspeed, February 2014. [GD]
  5. Elizabeth Bear, “Covenant.” Slate, September 11, 2014. [GD; JS; LM]
  6. Elizabeth Bear, “This Chance Planet.” Tor.com, October 22, 2014. [FW; LM]
  7. Helena Bell, “Lovecraft.” Clarkesworld, October 2014. [UM]
  8. Holly Black, “Ten Rules for Being an Intergalactic Smuggler (the Successful Kind).” Lightspeed, September 2014. [JS; LM]
  9. Aliette de Bodard, “The Days of the War, as Red as Blood, as Dark as Bile.” Subterranean, Spring 2014. [GD; LM]
  10. Richard Butner, “Circa.” Interfictions Online #3, May 2014. [UM]
  11. Richard Bowes, “Sleep Walking Now and Then.” Tor.com, July 9, 2014. [FW; LM; UM]
  12. Chaz Brenchley, “The Burial of Sir John Mawe at Cassini.” Subterranean, Spring 2014. [GD]
  13. Siobhan Carroll, “The Year of Silent Birds.” Beneath Ceaseless Skies, January 9, 2014. [FW]
  14. Dario Ciriello, “Free Verse.” Free Verse and Other Stories, Panverse, 2014. [KL]
  15. C. S. E. Cooney, “Witch, Beast, Saint: an Erotic Fairy Tale.” Strange Horizons, July 21, 2014. [LM]
  16. Julio Cortázar, “Headache.” Tor.com, September 3, 2014 (first English translation). [K&K]
  17. Tom Crosshill, “The Magician and Laplace’s Demon.” Clarkesworld, December 2014. [KL; LM; UM]
  18. Amanda C. Davis, “Loving Armageddon.” Crossed Genres, July 2, 2014. [K&K]
  19. Amal El-Mohtar, “The Truth About Owls.” Strange Horizons, January 26, 2015 (originally published in Alisa Krasnostein and Julia Rios (eds.), Kaleidoscope, Twelfth Planet Press, 2014). [JS; LM]
  20. Ruthanna Emrys, “The Litany of Earth.” Tor.com, May 14, 2014. [LM]
  21. K. M. Ferebee, “The Earth and Everything Under.” Shimmer #19, 2014. [FW; K&K]
  22. Jeffrey Ford, “The Prelate’s Commission.” Subterranean, Winter 2014. [LM]
  23. Karen Joy Fowler, “Nanny Anne and the Christmas Story.” Subterranean, Winter 2014. [K&K; LM]
  24. Max Gladstone, “A Kiss with Teeth.” Tor.com, October 29, 2014. [TC; previously on MeFi]
  25. Kathleen Ann Goonan, “A Short History of the Twentieth Century, or, When You Wish Upon A Star.” Tor.com, July 20, 2014. [LM]
  26. Theodora Goss, “Cimmeria: From the Journal of Imaginary Anthropology.” Lightspeed, July 2014. [JS; LM]
  27. Nicola Griffith, “Cold Wind.” Tor.com, April 16, 2014. [JS]
  28. Shane Halbach, “Copy Machine.” Flash Fiction Online, June 2014. [KL]
  29. Maria Dahvana Headley, “The Tallest Doll in New York City.” Tor.com, February 14, 2014. [FW; LM]
  30. Kat Howard, “The Saint of the Sidewalks.” Clarkesworld, August 2014. [LM]
  31. Pasi Ilmari Jääskeläinen, “Where the Trains Turn.” Tor.com, November 19, 2014. [LM]
  32. N. K. Jemisin, “Stone Hunger.” Clarkesworld, July 2014. [FW]
  33. Xia Jia, “Spring Festival: Happiness, Anger, Love, Sorrow, Joy.” Translated by Ken Liu. Clarkesworld, September 2014. [KL; UM]
  34. Xia Jia, “Tongtong’s Summer.” Translated by Ken Liu. Clarkesworld, December 2014 (originally in Neil Clarke (ed.), Upgraded, Wyrm Publishing, 2014). [KL]
  35. Rachael K. Jones, “Makeisha in Time.” Crossed Genres #20, August 2014. [BC]
  36. Stephen Graham Jones, “Chapter Six.” Tor.com, June 11, 2014. [LM]
  37. Vylar Kaftan, “Ink of My Bones, Blood of My Hands.” Beneath Ceaseless Skies, June 12, 2014. [FW]
  38. Caitlín R. Kiernan, “Bus Fare.” Subterranean, Spring 2014. [K&K]
  39. Ellen Klages, “Caligo Lane.” Subterranean, Winter 2014. [LM]
  40. Jay Lake, “West to East.” Subterranean, Summer 2014. [GD; LM]
  41. Rich Larson, “The Air We Breathe is Stormy, Stormy.” Strange Horizons, August 11, 2014. [K&K]
  42. Yoon Ha Lee, “Combustion Hour.” Tor.com, June 18, 2014. [FW; LM; UM; previously on MeFi]
  43. Yoon Ha Lee, “The Contemporary Foxwife.” Clarkesworld, July 2014. [LM; previously on MeFi]
  44. Yoon Ha Lee, “Wine.” Clarkesworld, January 2014. [LM; previously on MeFi]
  45. Rose Lemberg, “A City on Its Tentacles.” Lackington’s, Winter 2014. [SS]
  46. Kelly Link, “I Can See Right Through You.” McSweeney’s Quarterly 48, 2014. [LM]
  47. Ken Liu, “Reborn.” Tor.com, January 29, 2014. [UM]
  48. Ken Liu, “The Long Haul, From the ANNALS OF TRANSPORTATION, The Pacific Monthly, May 2009.” Clarkesworld, November 2014. [GD; JS; LM]
  49. Carmen Maria Machado, “Observations About Eggs from the Man Sitting Next to Me on a Flight from Chicago, Illinois to Cedar Rapids, Iowa.” Lightspeed, April 2014. [K&K; SS]
  50. Carmen Maria Machado, “The Husband Stitch.” Granta, October 28, 2014. [K&K; UM; SS]
  51. Usman T. Malik, “Resurrection Points.” Strange Horizons, August 4, 2014. [FW; K&K; KL]
  52. Usman T. Malik, “The Vaporization Enthalpy of a Peculiar Pakistani Family.” Medium, October 22, 2014 (originally in Michael Bailey (ed.), Qualia Nous, Written Backwards, 2014). [JS; KL; LM]
  53. Tim Maughan, “Four Days of Christmas.” Vice, December 24, 2014. [JS; LM]
  54. Sandra McDonald, “Selfie.” Lightspeed, May 2014. [LM]
  55. Sam J. Miller, “Kenneth: A User’s Manual.” Strange Horizons, December 1, 2014. [CMM]
  56. Mary Anne Mohanraj, “Communion.” Clarkesworld, June 2014. [GD]
  57. Sunny Moraine, “So Sharp That Blood Must Flow.” Lightspeed, February 2014. [K&K]
  58. Sunny Moraine, “What Glistens Back.” Lightspeed, November 2014. [UM]
  59. John P. Murphy, “Still Life, With Oranges.” Lakeside Circus, January 6, 2014. [KL]
  60. Anna Noyes, “Becoming.” Guernica, November 3, 2014. [CMM]
  61. An Owomoyela, “And Wash Out by Tides of War.” Clarkesworld, February 2014. [LM]
  62. Susan Palwick, “Weather.” Clarkesworld, September 2014. [GD]
  63. K. J. Parker, “Heaven Thunders the Truth.” Beneath Ceaseless Skies, October 2, 2014. [LM]
  64. K. J. Parker, “I Met a Man Who Wasn’t There.” Subterranean, Winter 2014. [JS; LM]
  65. K. J. Parker, “The Things We Do For Love.” Subterranean, Summer 2014. [LM]
  66. Richard Parks, “The Manor of Lost Time.” Beneath Ceaseless Skies, June 26, 2014. [LM]
  67. Richard Parks, “The Sorrow of Rain.” Beneath Ceaseless Skies, October 2, 2014. [LM]
  68. Shannon Peavey, “Dogs From Other Places” (audio only). Orson Scott Card’s InterGalactic Medicine Show, Issue 38, March 2014. [UM]
  69. Robert Reed, “Pernicious Romance.” Clarkesworld, November 2014. [LM]
  70. Alastair Reynolds, “The Last Log of the Lachrimosa.” Subterranean, Summer 2014. [LM]
  71. Mary Rickert, “The Mothers of Voorhisville.” Tor.com, April 30, 2014. [FW; LM; UM]
  72. Sofia Samatar, “How to Get Back to the Forest.” Lightspeed, March 2014. [CMM; LM]
  73. Kelly Sandoval, “The One They Took Before.” Shimmer #22, November 2014. [UM]
  74. John Scalzi, “Unlocked: An Oral History of Haden’s Syndrome.” Tor.com, May 13, 2014. [MU]
  75. Veronica Schanoes, “Among the Thorns.” Tor.com, May 7, 2014. [LM]
  76. Karl Schroeder, “Jubilee.” Tor.com, February 26, 2014. [GD]
  77. Lewis Shiner, “The Black Sun.” Subterranean, Summer 2014. [LM]
  78. Alex Shvartsman, “Icarus Falls.” Daily Science Fiction, September 23, 2014. [KL]
  79. Vandana Singh, “Wake-Rider.” Lightspeed, December 2014. [LM]
  80. Michael Swanwick, “Passage of Earth.” Clarkesworld, April 2014. [BN (winner); GD; LM]
  81. Rachel Swirsky, “Grand Jeté (The Great Leap).” Subterranean, Summer 2014. [GD; JS; KL; LM]
  82. Bogi Takács, “This Shall Serve as a Demarcation.” Scigentasy: Gender Stories in Science Fiction and Fantasy #6, July 5, 2014. [SS]
  83. Anna Tambour, “The Walking-Stick Forest.” Tor.com, May 21, 2014. [LM]
  84. Natalia Theodoridou, “The Eleven Holy Numbers of the Mechanical Soul.” Clarkesworld, February 2014. [KL]
  85. E. Catherine Tobler, “Migratory Patterns of Underground Birds.” Clarkesworld, May 2014. [FW]
  86. Jeremiah Tolbert, “In the Dying Light, We Saw a Shape.” Lightspeed, January 2014. [BN]
  87. Harry Turtledove, “The Eighth-Grade History Class Visits the Hebrew Home for the Aging.” Tor.com, January 8, 2014. [BC]
  88. Genevieve Valentine, “The Insects of Love.” Tor.com, May 28, 2014. [FW; JS; LM]
  89. Damien Angelica Walters, “The Floating Girls: A Documentary.” Jamais Vu 3, September 2014. [KL; UM]
  90. Damien Angelica Walters, “The Serial Killer’s Astronaut Daughter.” Strange Horizons, January 6, 2014. [BC]
  91. LaShawn M. Wanak, “21 Steps to Enlightenment (Minus One).” Strange Horizons, February 3, 2014. [FW; TC]
  92. Peter Watts, “The Colonel.” Tor.com, July 29, 2014. [GD; LM]
  93. Kai Ashante Wilson, “The Devil in America.” Tor.com, April 2, 2014. [JS; LM; UM]
  94. Alyssa Wong, “Santos de Sampaguitas” (also, part two). Strange Horizons, October 13, 2014. [UM]
  95. Alyssa Wong, “The Fisher Queen.” F&SF, May/June 2014. [KL; UM]
  96. Jy Yang, “Patterns of a Murmuration, in Billions of Data Points.” Clarkesworld, September 2014. [UM]
  97. Isabel Yap, “A Cup of Salt Tears.” Tor.com, August 27, 2014. [K&K; UM]
  98. Caroline Yoachim, “Five Stages of Grief After the Alien Invasion.” Clarkesworld, August 2014. [BN; KL; TC]

The initials at the end of each entry correspond to the critics, writers or anthologists who found these noticable: